Monday, October 8, 2007

Owe to Jacky

if u suffer, those who love u will suffer… so stop suffering… don’t get hurt, this may swell… hide ur wounds, air may infect it…

don’t ask for love.. like u ask for water all de time… if u deserve it… u will get it… don’t beg anyone, it’s a sin…

keep up ur honor.. If it falls... than cover it with mud n burry it deep… so no one can see that ur honor fell…

think of money, save it, trick with de things around you… and give it to those who gave you… u have favors to return…favors that are so high and large in number… I m afraid, u may never be able to return them at all…live for others… that’s life…

Who says love is all that we ever needed… remember that day u were asking for ‘jeans’… when I said I love you…and… and… and…

@ Capt. Jack Sparrow a.k.a Rohit

Firstly I would appreciate Jacky for allowing me to put some of his lines up on my post, I read his post '' de rivals ''i'' and....''i'' '', these lines , just hit me home .They just bought me back from a place, to realise some things I kinda lost in the hassle and bustle of a fast moving life .
In our lives we keep on emphasising on things like success, happiness, love,honour sidelining the small things which make us happy. We keep on cribbing about minor things when we have our universe with us which we just didn't notice before, and with all this 'so called messed up and hurt full felling'' ,we end up hurting the people close to us.
We some where down the line loose track of our priorities and that's where all the trouble gets started.

SO one thing for starters ''Keep your priorities in place,and everything else would fall into place''

7 comments:

president-''equilibrium'' said...

u write some thing.... n den some one .... u nvr knw even existed... trips through her home after reading it...! she puts up ur lines... n u r left mesmerized at de revived beauty she grants ur words...! n u r obliged!!

now... jiggs... u r an intuitive writer...! keep all de gud rolling out of ye...! very expressive rather!!

Anonymous said...

Jig..

Bloody damn true!. Fantastic lines. Last 2-3 Para’s reminded me someone who was very selfish in choosing her priorities :). Sometime people just forget that they are first priority of someone. Not every time your priorities put things in right place I guess.

Ravisekharan (a) Ravi said...

That was a cool one.

Anywayz! Great Blog u've. Will try to frequent yours... :-)

lucifier said...

jiggs interesting article this does happen i believe we have a universe inside us still we look for appreciation from outside to make us happy i even wrote a poem
describing this its on ma blog titled deep inside of poem now i am not a big poet or a writer just a person who loves to write and this one really made me think again keep blogginf

Anonymous said...

beautiful post i must say, and in perfectly right time for me.

Ajan said...

i liked the "in our lives.." part... thats what makes us different from each other.. good post rey..

Rakesh said...

dont beg for love....you did hit the nail rite on its head aditi..
Once the other person knows that you are begging for love they tend to take advtg of it